|Powers that Be #1 2/7/951
Title "Scream 'em Down", Part 1
Credits: Created by Broadway Comics
Written by: Janet Jackson, Joseph A. James, Jim Shooter, Pauline Weiss
Drawn: by Jim Fern2
Painted: Colored by
Cast of Characters
Splash, Page 1 - Right 2/6
Full page shot. Full bleed. Debris of battle all around,
lots of rubble. Pendulum, Raid, Harlot and Hole are on the ground
(and need not be shown; might see arm or leg out from under debris), a
good bit of blood. Superion should be down, staggered, trying to
pull himself together. Afterglow should be comforting/helping Superion,
but looking at Dominator defiantly, arms around Superion, arched back,
thrusting breasts. Dominator is preparing for final coup d'grace.
Mosque is coming at him, from behind, in a berserker attack. Mosque is
pretty beat up.
Now ends your interference, Superion. This time you taste final death!
Then I will finish off the rest of Team BloodSCREAM!
Blow it out your tailpipe, Dominator!
*kaff* -- just need -- *kaff* -- a second -- Afterglow -- *kaff*
-- then I'll shove that Blasterrod down his throat!
Page 2-3 (left-right) 2/6
Double page splash. See layout for panel placement!
Small inset of Dominator, upper left corner whirling around in reaction
Body of splash: Dominator whirls and with his blasterrod
blows through Mosque's midsection, clean thru.
well, then, Mosque! You first!
Inset of Afterglow's reaction, lower right side.
Inset of Superion, looking up in pain, lower right side.
Superion [small]: Mosque, you crazy son of a...
Page 4 (left) 2/6
Energy blast coming from off panel hitting Dominator, which zaps
him in the gut.
Afterglow (op): Monster!
Cut to Afterglow posing in a sexy defiant pose, proud bosom jutting
forward to the extent that her silicone implants will allow, smoking hands.
Afterglow: I hated you
before...for the sick things you did to Radiance...but this...!
Every breath you draw is an affront...
Afterglow does her spiralkick, leaving her energy trail.
Afterglow: I want you DEAD! NOW!
Dominator grabs her hair.
Dominator: Frailty, thy name is woman...
Page 5 (right) 2/6
Dominator looms over Afterglow. (See layout.)3
Dominator: Radiance bored me.
I used her with merciful swiftness...
But your succulent body offers far greater inspiration for my...destructive
Once I've completed the execution of your teammates...
Superion rises up, leaping at the Dominator, knocking him backward.
Superion: Get your hands
off of my woman!
Close-up of Dominator, tight on him. Wiping his face, inset.
Dominator: Imbecile! You would have
been served to close your eyes and pray for a clean deathstroke!
Superion slugs Dominator.
Superion: You were lucky,
Dominator! You caught me off guard...should have made sure I never got
Page 6 (left) 2/6
She's firing and the beam goes thorugh Dominator. Superion
is about to throw some large piece of debris at him. Dominator is
Dominator: There's no need to fight
you fairly! Next time, you won't get up!
Afterglow at Mosque's side. Superion is following, looking
on! We've called the medtechs! Help is on the way!
Mosque [small]: No...
Tight on his face, with her hands near it.
gonna make it this time...
...this time...final death.
Superion has her by the shoulders, as if he's gently holding her
back She's down over Mosque.
Afterglow: Superion, there
must be something we can do for him!
Superion: He's gone,
We have to help the others now. Some of them are badly hurt.
Tight two shot. He's embracing her with one arm, she's pressed
against his chest, crying. His other hand is clenched in a fist.
Superion: Then...I won't rest
until I've ripped the Dominator's black heart out and crushed it in my
Afterglow [thought]: And until then, we can never truly be together
in peace, can we, my love?
1This was actually
published in Shadow
2The published comic used art by
Hoang Nguyen not Jim Fern.
3This Script Archive does not have
a copy of the specified reference layout.
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